Week 20: Critical Practice

Mid Crit Feedback

This is the feedback that we got from the Mid Crit:

  • Make the story non-linear
  • Give the chooses for the user e.g., choose of to take the drugs, or to take the oxygen supply, or follow IO
  • Focus on a few Acts (Suggested: Act 2 or Act 3)
  • Clear user POV in both the AR & VR
  • AR as a tool: introduction to the world
  • AR idea: cam recording of the rover crash

A lot of the feedback was a reminder of making the story non-linear, we agreed that player get to choose what to do to progress in the story. An idea we had was to split Act 1 into an AR to introduction the player to the world, which goes into the comment of the players POV for both AR & VR. I personally think it would be interesting for the player have their own POV, as if they are their own unnamed character trying to figure out what happened on IO and then you go into VR as Marth and discover the story. I think it makes it makes the story compelling and expands the original story in the context of VR giving a reason why this story needs to be told in VR and AR.